Whispers in the Hollow

🌲 Story Pitch: WHISPERS IN THE HOLLOW

Tagline: Some forests remember. Some forests whisper. And some secrets should never be heard.

🌙 Short Summary:
The wind has a voice in Elder Hollow.
It speaks in the shiver of pine needles and the delicate crackle of frost beneath wandering boots. It breathes through ancient trees that remember far more than any living soul. Locals say the Hollow carries old secrets, and if you’re reckless enough to listen closely, it might even whisper them back.

Kaelen knows better.

With his pack snug against his shoulders, he presses deeper into the woods under a cold spill of moonlight. The narrow dirt path gleams pale ahead, the underbrush rimmed in silver. Elder Hollow is silent, eerily so. No crickets. No frogs. Just a hush that feels far from empty, as though something vast and unseen draws breath all around him. Watching. Waiting.

Kaelen tells himself he’s only passing through. But Elder Hollow has its own thoughts about visitors. And not every whisper is content to stay rooted among the trees.

🖤 Why authors will love to finish this novel:

🌿 A beautifully atmospheric beginning that plunges readers into a living, breathing forest brimming with folklore and quiet menace.

✨ Perfect for exploring tension, old magic, and the chilling cost of learning truths better left to shadows.

🌘 Ideal for fans of The Hazel Wood, The Witch’s Heart, or The Hollow Places — tales where nature hides ancient bargains and curiosity may prove fatal.

📚 Starter package includes:

✔️ A haunting first chapter rich with sensory detail, crafting a forest that feels alive — and deeply watchful.

✔️ Character insights, thematic sparks (the peril of seeking forbidden knowledge, loneliness drawn toward dark companionships, the thin line between awe and dread), plus lush natural textures.

✔️ Entirely yours to evolve into a gothic fantasy, eerie mystery, or dark folklore tale under your own name.

💷 Price: £49.99