Watching

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Tagline: He thought he had nothing left to lose — until he saw too much.

Short Summary:
Arthur Hale is invisible. A once-proud man brought low by cruel twists of humanity, he now wanders the streets of London with only Ruby, his loyal little terrier for company. By day, they beg for scraps; by night, they curl up beneath a local bridge until one night fate intervenes and the two seek refuge under the trees of Hyde Park, trying to stay warm.

That evening, as the city’s wealthy sleep behind locked doors, Arthur and Ruby witness something they were never meant to see, a brutal murder under the cover of darkness. Frozen by fear, Arthur knows that if he’s spotted, he won’t live to tell a soul.

In his panic to flee, Arthur darts into the street and straight into the path of an oncoming car. When he wakes in a hospital bed, battered and reeling from grief at Ruby’s death, his nightmare is only beginning. Because the murderer knows someone was watching that night. And now Arthur is being hunted through the city he thought he knew, stripped of allies, wealth, and even his beloved dog.

Why authors will love to finish this novel:

• Sets up a heart-wrenching thriller with a vulnerable, deeply sympathetic protagonist.
• Explores themes of grief, survival, and how society discards its most fragile, until they become dangerous witnesses.
• Plenty of room to build tense chases through iconic London streets, develop a clever game of predator and prey, or introduce unexpected allies among the homeless community.
• Perfect for fans of gritty suspense, emotional underdog stories, and cat-and-mouse thrillers.

Starter package includes:

✔️ The opening chapter that paint Arthur’s poignant bond with Ruby and the horrifying moment he becomes a witness

✔️ Character mental sketches, notes on Hyde Park and the underbelly of London’s streets, plus ideas for the killer’s chilling psychology.

✔️ Fully yours to expand into a complete novel for publication under your own name.

Price: £49.99