Twisted

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Tagline: He dreamed of the perfect family. Now he’ll build one, piece by piece.

Short Summary:
Six years ago, Charles Bracken stood trembling with hope at the altar, waiting for the life he always wanted to begin. But his beautiful bride never arrived. Humiliated, abandoned, and left to watch his dreams shatter, something inside Charles snapped that day.

Years pass. Charles drifts through life hollow and bitter — until one afternoon, he spots her. His former fiancée, radiant and happy, strolling through Heathrow Airport with a little girl clutching her hand. The sight ignites a sickening envy. He was supposed to have that life. That family. That little girl.

His grief warps into a monstrous obsession. Charles decides if fate won’t give him a daughter, he’ll create one. Piece by piece. He begins stalking the streets, kidnapping children, taking from each some small, awful “gift” to fashion into the perfect daughter he believes should have been his all along. As police scramble to solve a string of gruesome child abductions, Charles’s carefully constructed delusion grows more twisted and horrifying by the day.

But how long can he keep his dark masterpiece hidden? And what will happen when he decides his creation is finally complete? Then finally a brutal twist in the story, you will not see it coming.

Why authors will love to finish this novel:

• Offers a uniquely disturbing villain driven by shattered love and a warped paternal instinct, perfect for psychological horror or thriller genres.
• The premise promises shocking reveals, chilling crime scenes, and a disturbing look into obsession and grief turned grotesque.
• Can be developed into a tense cat-and-mouse game with detectives, a heartbreaking story of parents searching for their missing children, or a full dive into Charles’s fractured mind.
• Ideal for fans of Silence of the Lambs, Dexter, and dark psychological horror that lingers long after the final page.

Starter package includes:

✔️ First haunting chapter: Charles’s public humiliation at the altar, his descent into loneliness, and the fateful moment he sees his ex with her child.

✔️ Character outlines, psychological profile notes, and vivid descriptions of his eerie workshop.

✔️ Fully yours to expand into a complete, market-ready novel published under your own name.

Price: £49.99