TEN

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Tagline: They broke every commandment. Now he’ll enforce them, with blood.

Short Summary:
As a boy, Peter spent his childhood in the cold, echoing halls of his Parish — a place meant to shelter, and guide lost souls. Instead, it became a house of horrors. Behind locked doors, the priests who vowed to uphold God’s word preyed on innocence, leaving Peter scarred in body and spirit.

Years later, Peter has grown into a powerful man with haunted eyes and a chilling sense of purpose. The church might have forgotten what was done to him, but Peter hasn’t. Armed with an unwavering belief that divine justice must be served, he turns to the very foundation of his abusers’ hypocrisy: the Ten Commandments.

One by one, Peter interprets each holy law in his own twisted brand of vengeance — using “Thou shalt not kill” to justify murder, “Honor thy father and mother” to exact brutal punishments on cruel families, “Thou shalt not bear false witness” to expose secrets that end in blood. His crusade leaves a trail of bodies, shattered faith, and terror across the city.

Now the police, the media, and the shattered remnants of the church scramble to stop a monster they helped create. But Peter sees himself not as a sinner — but as God’s avenger, determined to make them all obey the commandments at last.

Why authors will love to finish this novel:

• A dark psychological thriller with deep moral complexity and rich theological undertones.
• Offers opportunities to explore Peter’s trauma, delusions of righteousness, and whether he is truly insane — or if he’s simply mirroring the monstrous hypocrisy of those who raised him.
• Each commandment can drive a chilling, symbolic murder, giving the story a unique structure that builds tension with every chapter.
• Perfect for fans of twisted revenge tales, religious horror, and gritty crime fiction with philosophical depth.

Starter package includes:

✔️ First gripping chapter detailing Peter’s childhood torment and the ominous beginnings of his plan.

✔️ Character sketches, thematic guides on each commandment’s “reimagined” punishment, and atmospheric notes to bring this dark world to life.

✔️ Fully yours to expand into a complete, publishable novel under your name.

Price: £49.99