Bully

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Tagline: They were pushed too far — now they’re pushing back.

Short Summary:
Oliver, Simon, Daniel, and Lizzy couldn’t be more different: the shy artist, the overachieving scholar, the quiet outcast, and the lonely new girl. But there’s one cruel thread that ties them together, each is the target of relentless bullying at Northwood High. Beaten down by taunts, humiliation, and violence, they find an unlikely bond in shared suffering.

One rainy afternoon, in the shadowy dank basement in Lizzy’s house, they make a pact. Enough is enough. Their tormentors, the popular kids who laugh while destroying lives are about to learn what real fear feels like. Together, the four hatch a chilling plan: kidnap their bullies, trap them to an abandoned school boiler room under the school, and make them pay.

What starts as a desperate act of reclaiming power spirals into something far darker. As secrets unravel and thirst for vengeance turns into bloodlust, each must face a haunting question: are they victims fighting back, or have they become something worse than the bullies who broke them?

Why authors will love to finish this novel:

• Sets up a tense, morally complex thriller with explosive character dynamics.
• Opens the door to exploring revenge, guilt, peer pressure, and the terrifying psychology of how victims can become perpetrators.
• Can evolve into a claustrophobic psychological game, a violent horror story, or even a sharp social commentary on bullying and cycles of violence.
• Perfect for fans of Gossip Girl turned Dexter, or dark coming-of-age thrillers like Heathers and The Craft.

Starter package includes:

✔️ First gripping chapter introducing each student, their individual torment, and the fateful moment they unite.

✔️ Detailed character profiles, relationship tensions, and notes on the gritty urban setting.

✔️ Fully yours to expand into a complete novel ready to publish under your own name.

Price: £49.99