Brutal

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Tagline: In a town full of secrets, murder is only the beginning.

Short Summary:
When the brutally mutilated body of a beloved local philanthropist is discovered in her lavish suburban home, the idyllic town of Brookhaven is shattered. Whispers of scandal ripple through garden parties and school gates, because beneath the town’s pristine surface lies a tangled mess of jealousy, betrayal, and hidden sins.

Detective Lucas Ward, still haunted by a case that went tragically wrong, is called in to investigate. As he delves into the victim’s glittering social circle, he uncovers toxic friendships, illicit affairs, and blackmail schemes that suggest nearly everyone had a motive for murder.

Then another body is found, staged in a grotesque display that feels like a message meant just for him. Panic grips Brookhaven as it becomes clear a cunning, cold-blooded killer is lurking among them, relishing each violent strike.

Racing to stop the body count from rising, Lucas must navigate lies and confront his own dark memories. Because the closer he gets to the truth, the more he realises that some secrets were buried for good reason, and dragging them into the light might be the most brutal revelation of all.

Why authors will love to finish this novel:

🩸 Compelling murder mystery: Packed with suspects, motives, and shocking twists that keep the reader guessing.

🧠 Psychological depth: Explores guilt, revenge, and how far people will go to protect their darkest secrets.

🚓 Flexible storylines: Could evolve into a chilling serial killer hunt, a courtroom drama, or an explosive small-town unravelling.

📚 Perfect for fans of Big Little Lies, Sharp Objects, and gritty detective thrillers.

Starter package includes:

✔️ First gripping chapter introducing the murder scene, the flawed detective, and the town’s suspicious cast of characters.

✔️ Character sketches and threads of subplots ready for you to expand.

✔️ Fully yours to finish into a complete, publishable novel under your own name.

Price: £49.99